Friday, November 13, 2009

english thingy

The group decided to go check out the haunted house way in the country that everyone was always talking about. When they got a ride there, Sarah felt this chill run down her spine. When they got to the middle of the field they saw the house. It was a run down dark and eerie place. Definitely the opposite if inviting. They cautiously went towards it. As Sarah was walking through the field she felt something pull her leg and it became harder and harder to walk. Something eventually was pulling her whole body down. She tripped over a rock and found herself unable to get up. She yelled “Help! Help,” but no one would listen. The group went ahead and eventually, so far that she couldn’t see them anymore. When she lost her voice from yelling “help,” it began to get windy and windier. Shortly after, rain started to bounce of her head, then her leg, then her whole body was drenched. In the shadows of the clouds, she saw a black figure. Something unnatural. It was coming towards her…

2 comments:

  1. That is pretty much the teacher's story!

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  2. Yeah, this is my english teacher's version of one of our assigments. it was an example and I liked it so i put on here.

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